>>154200239(OP) So MORE cartoon self inserts? These guys' answer to annoying stupid indy toons was to keep on making self insert shows but imitating Family Guy this time instead of Owl house?
>>154200239(OP) >Named "Chimp" topia >Pilot is making fun of the latest GLITCH cartoon >Animator has only just over 2,000 followers >Asking for all that money for their series that looks like a Newgrounds animation made after classes >The description of what this show is suppose to be about, a mixture of Seinfeld, South Park and Smiling Friends Either a poor way of outrage baiting some money to compensate for the lack of a follower count needed or it's a scam
>>154200239(OP) They should have done the Aqua Teen thing and make their self inserts into some kind of absurd cartoon character/ta;ling animal or object that fucks with the world. That would have made it a lot more interesting than three nondescript guys. It also gives them something to work with when the whole >Three guys who just kinda hang out falls flat or becomes even less interesting.
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Anonymous06/14/26(Sun)06:44:21
>>154200239(OP) >entire premise hinges on another property Already a failure. But even if it only gets a thousand viewers on average it'll still get posted by some autist saying glitch btfo
>$10 for just your name in the credits Holy greed, Batman
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Anonymous06/14/26(Sun)06:46:24
>>154201050 True, some actual Looney Tunes knockoffs fucking up Glitch characters would be more fun to watch. Or even knockoff TMNT or Transformers beating up modern into toons would have been something more fun to see.
>>154200239(OP) Beating up glitch character aside, this kind of looks like a home-made version of every other boring as fuck Macfarlane knockoff cartoon that has been filling up every streaming service for the last decade.
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Anonymous06/14/26(Sun)06:49:30
>>154200933 Based anything that makes fun of GLITCH productions is a plus in my book
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Anonymous06/14/26(Sun)06:52:49
>>154201061 On the creators Twitter account he states that he's just about to graduate college and wants to know how feasible it is to start a Kickstarter despite his small following So some of this cash is going to paying off those student loans lol
Keep in mind that Monkey Wrench usually costs 56k or so to make an episode, the hell do they need 500k for?
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Anonymous06/14/26(Sun)06:53:25
>>154200239(OP) >"Why watch Gameoverse when you can watch Family Guy instead?" Dogshit vs diarrhea
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Anonymous06/14/26(Sun)07:01:12
>>154200239(OP) how do you draw something like this and think "ah yes, people will look at this and want to watch my show" like how do you have zero sense of appeal as an artist?
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Anonymous06/14/26(Sun)07:01:51
>>154201189 It already sounds so tiresome. >”The characters in this world are hateful and full of spite-“
>>154201204 >Why are the Glitch fangirls raging at the thing that made fun of Glitch? I don't understand.
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Anonymous06/14/26(Sun)07:08:35
>>154200239(OP) zoomers yearn for a Drawn Together with indie cartoons
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Anonymous06/14/26(Sun)07:09:07
>>154200239(OP) is there art of the guys in the middle fucking yet?
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Anonymous06/14/26(Sun)07:11:13
>>154201189 it's more like "this will make people talk about my show" which is totally working, bad publicity is still publicity
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Anonymous06/14/26(Sun)07:12:35
>>154200239(OP) >>154200274 Ehh...I get what they are trying to do, it just wasn't really funny. If they pulled off making it funny then any amount of bitching about attacking glitch wouldn't matter.
>>154200239(OP) These character designs are fucking terrible holy shit. If you're going to have the balls to go after the king (from a relative standpoint, not my own opinion) of indie animation, have something to swing with. The names of the characters tell me they're all the creators' personas, and fuck me, the voice "acting" is so dull. I like cynical characters, but the show needs to understand that what makes them enjoyable is when they're PUNISHED for their worldview, not supported. If an indie animation show is telling me that indie animation is shit while also panhandling, why the fuck would I give them money? Also, I think it's in bad taste to shit on indie animation in the first place. There's definitely a lack of well done episodic stuff, but pulling a crab bucket isn't the way to solve that. It just feels mean spirited.
>>154201050 >>154201073 Seconding this, if they were going to imitate Screwball Squirrel then go that extra mile and make the characters the mean spirited wacky toons with hammers and anvils, and they fuck up the modern gay toons out back behind a tree.
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Anonymous06/14/26(Sun)07:17:28
>>154200239(OP) >Shits on lore based shows >The alternative is another boring episodic "navigating life in your 20s" At least lore shit is interesting. What is it about "being a poor 20 year old learning about life" that makes some people dead set on it as a good concept? Animation can make anything happen and the extent of your creativity is that? I assume these people think their lives are interesting but I don't really give a shit about their life. This is the 6th time I've seen this concept and it never hooks me. Comparing yourself to other shows only makes someone think "I should watch that instead of this".
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Anonymous06/14/26(Sun)07:17:34
>>154201308 Without a hook. Dan Vs had a plot behind it that could lead to episodes. This show is described as Seinfeld meets Smiling Friends. So their whole concept is...friends that hang out and do friend stuff sometimes.
That roughly translates the whole elevator pitch to >It's a show about how desperately I want to have a cartoon real bad! Please let me be a cool director! It's actually kind of a common thing among students, they really want to be the showrunner but have no ideas. So all their concepts are basic level nothing that would allow them to be a showrunner to some degree.
It's a Kyle Carozza pitch without the pun named talking object characters
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Anonymous06/14/26(Sun)07:24:05
>>154200239(OP) i feel like it would take very little tweaking to make this seem more like a good-natured jab and less like griping. the main character just looks like such an unlikable asshole, that’s really the only problem. aside from that, this guy seems like a decent animator and i’m always charmed when people put on some filters that make their ‘toon look like it was made on cels. i’m cautiously optimistic about this one.
>>154201276 im talking purely about the visuals, there's literally nothing to them. just 3 bland motherfuckers in the middle of a street. what is that saying about the show?
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Anonymous06/14/26(Sun)07:31:21
>>154201333 It needs a little extra something to make it actually an interesting cartoon and not some boring sitcom that would never make it past 3 episodes. >Navigating life in your 20s...and your roommate is a cave man >Navigating life in your 20s... and your step-dad is Batman >Navigating life in your 20s...and your from 300 years in the future >Navigating life in your 20s...and you are a broke ex child star now having to get a minimum wage job >Navigating life in your 20s...and you can understand dog's speech >Navigating life in your 20s...and your younger brother is a child prodigy genius inventor of cancer cures and space ships...also you work at a grocery store >Navigating life in your 20s...and smoking weed causes your soul to leave your body for an hour >Navigating life in your 20s...and you just got back from spending 3 years in an isekai world fighting demons and saving a fantasy kingdom...also you work at a grocery store.
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Anonymous06/14/26(Sun)07:33:13
>>154201436 >overdone premise but with a wacky transplant gimmick character none of these are good ideas
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Anonymous06/14/26(Sun)07:33:18
>>154201376 >i’m always charmed when people put on some filters that make their ‘toon look like it was made on cels. That's because the whole teaser is a pastiche of a Tex Avery cartoon, the actual show won't look like that.
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Anonymous06/14/26(Sun)07:33:51
>>154201334 Dan Vs also had a plot to send the characters on a Wile E. Coyote style scheme against some antagonist each episode. Also the wife of the sidekick was a superspy that did superspy shit every episode, usually saving them in the process like Perry the Platypus.
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Anonymous06/14/26(Sun)07:35:08
>>154201459 Phineas and Ferb also did the cartoon escalation. It was a show about inventive kids, also their pet is a spy that fights an evil scientist every episode.
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Anonymous06/14/26(Sun)07:35:48
>>154200239(OP) Is it supposed to look like a goanimate cartoon?
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Anonymous06/14/26(Sun)07:36:09
>>154201436 I'm not pitching a series to a studio, I quickly tossed out ideas in a minute or two to make up something that was less boring than >3 guys that do stuff.
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Anonymous06/14/26(Sun)07:37:09
>>154201482 Then toss it right back up your ass faggot because you ideas are shit and you should kill yourself.
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Anonymous06/14/26(Sun)07:38:30
>>154201436 Who in all fuck wants more 70s era Hanna Barbera shit spinoffs? Fuck off with this stupid bullshittery anon.
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Anonymous06/14/26(Sun)07:39:08
>>154201436 >This pilot >Wastelandia >Catching up >The Other Side >Hey >That one Daft Pina cartoon This shit is just so bland. All these concepts aren't good either. I don't get why lore based shows are seen as a negative when this shit has nothing going on. None of these suggestions hook me. I will always pick a lore show than this.
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Anonymous06/14/26(Sun)07:40:00
>>154201436 >Navigating life in your 20s...and your from 300 years in the future I had an idea for a show like that with the characters being nostalgic for all the slop media we're getting now, would be funny IMO
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Anonymous06/14/26(Sun)07:42:24
>>154200239(OP) The twitter indie fan loser spectators that make nothing are seething. Of course the average indie subhuman fan has not a clue what they're referencing. Like they'd ever watch an actual cartoon made before 2010, those are too heckin problematic.
>>154201276 It worked out so well for The New Norm.
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Anonymous06/14/26(Sun)07:49:40
>>154201276 Even worse, this will be the most popular it's ever been. It will either not make the money for the pilot, or will and have it be mediocre. People will remember the size of the creators' balls and look upon how they shriveled in the big kids' pool.
That was so painfully unfunny it almost circled back around to being funny again. Like a parody of a parody. >Make Gobbles look really stupid and goofy >Heh..one of those... >Me and my bland friends beat him up >Also vaguely looney tunes setup but none of the payoff >The punchline is beating up Barney like we're 7 year olds
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Anonymous06/14/26(Sun)10:20:33
>>154201290 Why should they be punished for their world view?
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Anonymous06/14/26(Sun)10:26:12
>>154200239(OP) This shit looks like it sucks. It looks like some unfunny shit these bland as fuck dudes I knew in high-school would make. Narcissists who thought they were hilarious and thought robot chicken and Seth Green were the funniest things ever. No creativity at all.